tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post6763823160353256129..comments2023-06-18T14:50:35.677+05:30Comments on In my point of view: Tarun Mitra's Blog: Separated River: A love Story Part ITarun Mitrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07121533974931375556noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-80075475510466984232010-02-14T19:09:16.434+05:302010-02-14T19:09:16.434+05:30@ Gyanban...I couldn't agree more when it come...@ Gyanban...I couldn't agree more when it comes to rephrasing is concerned and crispiness, but as far as grammar is concerned it adhered to word rule..Looking forward for more such comments it will really be helpful for me to draft newer things..:)Tarun Mitrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07121533974931375556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-14459073712278943902010-02-14T11:50:53.215+05:302010-02-14T11:50:53.215+05:30I think you have the central idea quite strong, ho...I think you have the central idea quite strong, however, i feel the delivery needs to be a bit more crisp.Some sentence rephrasing and grammar corrections as well. look for ward to reading part deux.aayanmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881273343571611950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-50405679255441307262010-01-26T00:49:07.575+05:302010-01-26T00:49:07.575+05:30@ Anon what info...@ Anon what info...Tarun Mitrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07121533974931375556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-47156679985257864232010-01-25T21:27:22.678+05:302010-01-25T21:27:22.678+05:30The information here is great. I will invite my fr...The information here is great. I will invite my friends here.<br /><br />ThanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-61412677446784383122009-11-12T00:24:14.455+05:302009-11-12T00:24:14.455+05:30@ Rajat, Thanks
@Additti, Thanks,a better questio...@ Rajat, Thanks<br /><br />@Additti, Thanks,a better question<br /><br />@Shivani, I can give u few more options, it seems u are feeding yourself on hindi soaps these days<br /><br />@Megha, Nice try .:)<br /><br />@ Mridula, I don't publish until I am sure that I will be able to back it up, I too moody, for me tomorrow never comes.Therefore I finished the story first...but I do make some exceptions..<br /><br />Thank You all for commentingTarun Mitrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07121533974931375556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-37252395484045662782009-11-11T21:56:51.465+05:302009-11-11T21:56:51.465+05:30You have all the three parts written? Just curious...You have all the three parts written? Just curious.Mridulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07899575209261241247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-80322847440480646432009-11-11T18:08:40.022+05:302009-11-11T18:08:40.022+05:30Hopefully he will try to gain her confidence and n...Hopefully he will try to gain her confidence and not just let her slip away...<br /><br />Waiting for the next part...Meghahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-58784552676012105622009-11-11T15:02:28.824+05:302009-11-11T15:02:28.824+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15821160074814301670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-60781313732687070342009-11-11T13:20:00.446+05:302009-11-11T13:20:00.446+05:30very nice, waiting for the next part with question...very nice, waiting for the next part with questions like: "why did she behaved like that, what will he do now ????"Anamikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15978683003442720830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8666812024373050289.post-91170408642268591202009-11-11T13:05:43.050+05:302009-11-11T13:05:43.050+05:30Oh Boy!! Do complete this one soon.. waiting for n...Oh Boy!! Do complete this one soon.. waiting for next partDRIVENhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15930725779329759181noreply@blogger.com