On a bright sunny day
When lovers stroll their way
I rest my ass on grass
With the book which is crass
With the sun hitting my face
Without sun-screen in this case
Thinking about the test
I lay my book to rest
There were green all around
High pines look me down
I thought taking a walk
Only to get some real shock
There she stood in pink
The color she wanted me to drink
A guy was holding her hands
The one who wore grey pants
They looked happy and gay
As they began to sway
I was left in lurch
I moved toward the perch
I want to hear their talk
As they talked and walk
He said he is a vet
As I hid my silhouette
It was a blind date
But was on my wedding cake
Cupid’s arrow did struck
My heart bled, and their fluffed
Dejected- I turned back
I needed my book to relax
I reached the grass where I rest
I have to prepare for the test
There was a book once
But now there was none
A swine took it away
Spoiling my fine sunny day
Soon my cell-phone rang
From there she pang
Her disapproval of mine
A bungee from cloud nine
Losing my book
Losing my girl
Flunking the test
I became a jest
On a bright sunny day
© Tarun Mitra
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12 comments:
hey its really very nice
hey thats really very nice :)
keep going :D
Wow!!! Very Nice Indeed :)
The unfailing rhyme and rhythm are appreciable, I didn't miss the humour either. The humour was kinda slapstick and blunt, to the likes of Catch22.
quite interesting scenarios on a bright sunny day...well composed..thnk u a lot for ur feedback on "Shadow" and for following my blog :)
I must say poor guy!
@ Shivani... Thanks
@ Chakoli...thank you I will try my best
@ Sujay...thanks...well I am like that only..kinda slapstick and blunt..
@Priyanka....yours is a lovely poem..I try..
@Mridula...indeed he is..:)
Thank you all for your comments
I enjoyed the poem. The sentence "A guy was holding his hands" cracked me up. I think you meant "A guy was holding her hand".
@ Hari Woops that is a typo....I changed it to her but forgot to save it in the draft..done now
good one..good one..dude..
Thanks Sorcerer :)
Fiction or true ? :(
Good one Tarun, hope we get to read more poetries from you.
@ Megha....fiction are inspired by facts distorted by reality subjected to inspiration..now this one came suddenly out of nowhere and engulfed me...and nothing is always or never...Seriousness apart, poem is not at any case direct reflection of my life...:P and thanks for appreciation surely will try better
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