I wrote this piece almost 5 years back November 17, 2004 to be precise, the time when I actually realized I can write, I somewhat feel like this even now, do leave your comments
Left Alone
I am in the middle of the ocean
Left alone- nowhere to go
Sky is clouded- I can’t see stars
I couldn’t find my way home
I see no star, no light, no hope
To guide me out of this lonely sea
I’ve lost all my gadgets
I couldn’t find the distance
I’m left with only one piece of cloth
Is it a night?
Or a day turned dark
I’m struggling for life
Amongst approaching shark
I’m fighting hard
I’ve lost sight to time, day and date
Month and year I’m stranded all alone
I’m in the middle of the ocean
Left alone- nowhere to go
© Tarun Mitra
9 comments:
Melancholic but sums up the mood well. I hope the protagonist survived and found a lot of lights. :D
B E A U tiful....
awesome work..
But what happened around that time that you even remembered the date when wrote this?
Very nice. I like it.
By any chance were you sad when you wrote this ? I dont know if you'll remember, but really nice.
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@ Mridula..yep it is...protagonist has survived and is commenting back to you..but the poem still holds true :( :D
@ Rajat...yep i remember the date..November 17, 2004 to be exact..thanks
@ Megha..yep I was...but have got maturer a lot since
@ Sanand Thanks and thanks again for tagging me..will sure return the favour...:)
seriously beautiful.....
amazing
actaully the metaphors u have used is actaully the best part in the poem
keep it up
@ Shivani...many thanks :)
very nice tarun... really really nice... the mood comes across very nicely
Cheers!
Tavish
@ Tavish...Thanks a lot buddy :)
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